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仙鹤（仿和神宇）

2010-01-19 22:51:24| 分类：诗歌长廊 | 标签： |举报 |字号大中小订阅

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双鹤翩翩舞尽欢，

飘雪沐浴羽衣鲜。

颈上红顶谁人点，

丹心何曾照宇寰！

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这是在点评圈友神宇的七绝《仙鹤》时有感而发仿和而成的一个顺口溜，无律无韵，全凭感觉，让神宇和朋友们见笑了！神宇的原作图文并茂，非常漂亮，我做不来，想复制到这里让大家共商也做不到，愧对神宇和朋友们了！

下面是神宇的原诗《仙鹤》

双鹤欢欣舞尽欢，足迷雪地羽衣鲜。红球颈上仙人剪，一片丹心照宇寰！

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